Away, away and under
The age old blinking lamp
Sat the two young lovers
Holding their hands.
No longer blinking periodically
Old was the lamp’s attire
A light so dull and devoid
Of the lovers’ passionate fire.
The age old blinking lamp
On the age old winding lane
Stood guard for the couple
Under the oak’s mane.
A sentinel and confidante
To the age-old secret trysts
Stood the blinking lamp
As the lovers so gleefully kissed.
And the two talked
And laughed and loved
As many others had before
And many others will afterward.
Neither was there deference
Nor was there fear
Despite their forbidden trysts
Down the seaside pier.
The sentinel stood still
A witness to time’s fancies
Trees grew old and withered
Dying with the daisies.
The father came to know
The star crossed lovers met no more
One would come and whisper
Cry before the confidante’s door.
They married happily
But not each other, no,
And all that remained of their fierce fire
Was the lamp’s dismal woe.
But such was the case
Of star crossed lovers
And with a sigh, the blinking lamp
Stood guard for others.
Splendid!! Poem! Keep writing and sharing!!
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Thank you, Ashee!
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Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️
Such objects stand testimonial to various personal events of history. Usually writers associate this eternal continuity with nature but you chose a lamp which is very very creative! Especially the part where you compare it’s glow to the fire in their hearts… 🔥🔥🔥
Loved it!
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Hey Bhavya! Hope you’re doing well.
I am so glad that you noticed the subtle details of the poem! And it is such an irony that the objects we make outlast us and become witnesses to such events. Thanks a lot, Bhavya!
Have a lovely week ahead!
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Yes I’m good! Hope the same for you!
Very true…😊💖
Thank you Rashi. I wish the same to you! 😉😉
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Beautiful 💙
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Thanks a lot, Era!
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😊😊
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Superb poem. It bring memories of the one that got away. Thank you for this post.
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Hi Geri! Thank you for taking out the time to write such a lovely comment. And thank you for your appreciation!
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Beautiful💖💖
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Thank you!
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Amazing! Beautifully penned.
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Thank you!
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Wow!
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Beautiful🤍
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Thank you so much!
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