Winds of revenge take me down
As I strive to pierce the sky
Guilt of my doings tears me apart
And I stifle the urge to cry.
The dark clouds form a hurricane
And I stand in its midst, agitated
And the Styx below me rages
And the tides are then levitated.
Maelstroms wash over the shore
And the Titanic hits the chunk of ice
Sinking deeper, I see more plights
Merpeople scuttering away like mice.
Am I such a sinister being?
Is this all because of me?
My misdeeds push me to grieve
For I have caused this frenzy.
This venture has lead
To my awaited end
With plunders and mistakes
I might have to bow and bend.
I might be damned
But I shall soon rise from the dead
I shall overcome my flaws
I shall lead and be the head.
Your judgements don’t harm me
Your punishments don’t hurt me
There are million more ventures to do
And several more sights to see.
-R.S.
👏👏👏👏 marvelous !
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Thank you so much, Novus!
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Very well written, great use of vocabulary! Well done 😊
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Thanks a lot for your words of appreciation! ☺
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You’re welcome 😊
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Well expressed! Beautiful!
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Thank you for reading!
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Fantastic imagery, really poetic language! Great read! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Tom!
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Hi. I am a new blogger in WordPress. Hope that we’re friends and keep in touch with you. Try to visit mine too. I would be glad hearing some advises from you. Thank you. I also followed your blog. Nice themes and design huh? Oh and also the content. It was great.
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Welcome to WordPress! I am considerably new as well. I just started blogging in May… So I’m not sure about the advices because I’m still learning. But I’ll try my best to provide constructive feedback and criticism when needed. Thank you for the follow. I’ll take a look at your blog as soon as I can…Sure, we’ll keep in touch and thank you for appreciating my work.☺✌
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Me too. I started my blog 2 months ago. And it was a bit hard but what’s new? We have to learn and develop our skills and enjoy what we are doing rn and love our work. I’m just 17 years old that’s why my grammar is kinda lame haha. But thanks for replying. Keep blogging too. Hope to meet you soon. God bless.
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I started about 3 months ago and yeah, it was initially a bit difficult, managing the blog along with the day to day chores and school but I’ve learnt to write devotedly and spend time on the regularly. True, what really matters is that we enjoy our work, develop and improve. I’m sure you’ll improve and get a lot better.
Happy blogging!
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Thank you.
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Great job! Your linguistics here have been very impressive! 🙌
But you could still improve your rhymes though… Cut through words which can be assumed/modify some so as to make them flow.
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Thank you! Well, I’ll make the changes as soon as possible…Thank you for the advice☺
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nice use of language
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Thank you, Nadia!
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Your pieces always deal with such strife, but they end in hope and redemption. I’m enjoying that.
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There is light at the end of every tunnel and I strongly believe in this quote…I’m glad you are enjoying 🙂 . Although, I’ve been trying to write something different…
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YOU are not a sinister being, you are the calm before the ocean. Good one there Rachel, the words are moving 🙂 ❤ ❤
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Thank you for reading Pia!☺
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Nice… Great!!
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Thanks!
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